Re: www.MethowValley.org-2025
Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2025 9:11 am
You said:
In this night
there is the light
suppression of peace
within a maddened zone
quite and tempered
peach and plum
need and numb
in this darkness
there need not be despair
the lord is my shepherd
Thou I might faulter
and demons bite at my heals
the throne of christ is before us
if only in a moment of vision
the gates of hell unleash the final episode
for the new story to begin
Less sin
signs of improvement
designed for peace
prosperity
intensity
looking to goodness
finding ways for society to function
without evil in always
finding less obscene
not just dream
worthy of the love god endures of us
tears of floods
fire and brimstone
must it be
as it is to be
reaction
distraction
interaction
I pray for peace yet none is given by those that will rule us or destroy us.
Only a slave would submit to no cannabis to help mediate the madness of the world.
Slave Driver catch your fire
The madness continues
with gladness
gladness of hope
hope for a new beginning
for all else to fail
hells bells emergency
acdc style
I might dance if I don't have to sing
I could live if I grew a wing
the saint
not sinless
fighter of evil
communion with god
my father
friends achieve greatness
transparency
distillation
redundency
assimulation
captain kirk calling bickard
the borg attacks
big smack crack attack
rock on the rise
human demise
love each other
it is commanded
love god
commanded as well
take no others before the creator of ALL
only one god of all creation
I am creation
raise I not to an empire
I am alone in my quest to god
It is my religion
I am on my own because I know and love Jesus
He family to me
I honor him
and he speaks sharply
I am sin
nothing more
created to sin
to continue sin
to learn
to strive to do better
yearning for greatness in all mankind
wanting better
not wanting to know one
when drug infested evil permeates the streets
housing projects
little left
clinging for hope
welfare check
straight line
blind
seeing in the dark
aware of the evil
not feeding
greeding
needing
while others go
go to the spring
to do that thing
dance easter bunny dance
hoping to hang on
praying for eternal light
giving in to the fight
might of right
fate of hate
war upon war
without honor
children destroyed
families ruined
give in
ruled
fooled
grueled
shall not kill
shall not steal
seek and destroy
felony class
charged
waiting for life
of good and medicine
laughter and love
sickness and health
needed in wealth
no time to stand in protest
they are satanic at best
no hero for zero
stereotype
gripe
I have not the answer...
I look to God and his voice is calm.
Be patient as jesus takes time
taking time
rhyme after dime
moses roses
forgive my transgresses
and pray I transgress no more
he who runs away
lives to love another day
The coyote called
and it was great
brother coyote heavily coated
the honor
the glory
god is great
let the day be night
and the night be day
and all good glows in the spirit of men
whom forever shall shine
ChatGPT said:
That piece feels like a psalm written in modern language — part prayer, part lament, part protest, part vision. It flows like a stream of consciousness but has the bones of scripture and song, pulling in images from the Bible, rock lyrics, protest poetry, and even sci-fi mythos. It’s raw, prophetic, and deeply personal.
If you’d like, I can help you shape it into something usable in your movie — maybe as:
A Voiceover / Prophecy Scene
Tritanium Man rides through the night, the radio fades, and this is spoken in voiceover (with layered effects, as if it’s both his inner voice and God’s). The visuals could cut between street life, drug war chaos, families struggling, then glimpses of hope (a child laughing, someone planting a garden, the light on the mountains).
A Poetic Interlude / Chapter Break
The film could pause for these words to scroll on screen, or be spoken like slam poetry on stage. It could divide acts of the story, giving it a sacred rhythm.
A Hymn / Song Lyrics
With some repeated lines and rhythm, this could turn into a hymn-like chant or rock ballad. You already dropped AC/DC style, which suggests you imagine it musically — maybe heavy guitar riffs underscoring lines like:
“Hell’s bells emergency / AC/DC style / I might dance if I don’t have to sing…”
Here’s a polished version of your text, broken into stanzas so it reads like prophecy/poem while keeping your voice:
Modern Psalm of Night and Light
In this night, there is the light,
suppression of peace within a maddened zone.
Quiet and tempered, peach and plum,
need and numb.
In this darkness, there need not be despair.
The Lord is my shepherd.
Though I falter, and demons bite at my heels,
the throne of Christ is before us.
If only in a moment of vision,
the gates of hell unleash the final episode,
so the new story may begin:
less sin, more peace, prosperity, intensity.
Look to goodness.
Find ways for society to function without evil.
Not obscene, not just dream —
worthy of the love God endures of us.
Tears like floods, fire and brimstone.
Must it be, as it is to be?
Reaction. Distraction. Interaction.
I pray for peace, yet none is given
by those who would rule or destroy us.
Only a slave would submit to a world
with no cannabis to mediate madness.
Slave driver, catch your fire.
The madness continues —
but with it, gladness of hope.
Hope for a new beginning,
when all else has failed.
Hell’s bells emergency — AC/DC style.
I might dance if I don’t have to sing.
I could live if I grew a wing.
Not sinless, but a fighter of evil,
I commune with God my Father.
Jesus, my brother, my family,
speaks sharply:
I am sin, nothing more —
yet I am created to strive,
to learn, to yearn for greatness
in all mankind.
Children destroyed, families ruined,
streets poisoned by drugs and greed.
But still —
shall not kill.
Shall not steal.
Love each other.
Love God.
I have not the answer.
I look to God, and His voice is calm:
Be patient.
Jesus takes time.
Forgive my transgressions,
I pray I transgress no more.
He who runs away lives to love another day.
The coyote called, and it was great.
Brother coyote, heavily coated.
The honor. The glory. God is great.
Let the day be night,
let the night be day,
and all good glow in the spirit of men
who forever shall shine.
Would you like me to format this as a screenplay moment (with stage directions, visuals, and voiceover) so it could slot right into your No Budget Movie — or leave it as a poem/hymn that stands apart from the script?
You said:
I am living the human experience with a wild spirit in my heart. My mama was adopted by a german lady married to a sioux. the sioux are my tribe through adoption of my mom. We are the wildest and the craziest of all legal nations of this land of America.
Crazy Horse
Is a spirit in my heart
with his way
we have this start
I declare
USA nation without God
unholy exploration
at this abomination I glare
Declaration of independence
Into the constitution again
ChatGPT said:
That’s deep — you’re weaving your personal story, family roots, tribal adoption, and spiritual identity into a declaration that feels both poetic and revolutionary. It sounds like something that could work beautifully as a monologue in your film or as a poetic manifesto in writing.
Here’s a polished version that keeps your raw voice but gives it rhythm, so it lands strong on the page or screen:
Wild Spirit Declaration
I am living the human experience
with a wild spirit in my heart.
My mama was adopted
by a German woman
married to a Sioux.
The Sioux are my tribe —
through the adoption of my mother,
their fire runs through me.
We are the wildest,
the craziest
of all legal nations
in this land called America.
Crazy Horse —
his spirit rides in my chest.
With his way,
we have this start.
I declare:
The USA, a nation without God,
wanders in unholy exploration.
At this abomination, I glare.
And so I turn back—
Declaration of Independence.
Into the Constitution again.
This could be read by Tritanium Man as a kind of voiceover manifesto while visuals show him biking through town, Native imagery, or even American flags and documents dissolving into fire and smoke before returning to light.
Do you want me to adapt this into a screenplay opening monologue, where Tritanium Man speaks it as the camera slowly pushes in on him (like a presidential address, but wild and poetic)? That would make it cinematic and tie it into your film’s message.
You said:
Lessons to learn
when is the time to teach?
I am student
not teacher
when I meet
I wonder
teach me
honor mi with thou life's knowledge
Be my teacher for a moment in time
Let Mystro speak through a holy heart
I will listen
I must learn
Manifest Destiny
Hate is reactionary to evil
i was evil
devil had my heart
only god sent angel
O so many
and his patients was unending
and still i was student
as U seeked teacher
and I would not teach
for I am not ALL
who am i
to teach U
When ALL teaches through U to I
I am not perfect in flesh
only he that created U y I is perfect in ALL Ways
Sin permeates my flesh
seems to go way of entropy
poisoned
ill health
thought deterioration
i must concede
Without cannabis
thought madness is ALL consuming
ALL loves ALL
ALL is All Loving
And loves this form of man Tristan B Gilbert
Tristan B Gilbert hates evil
ALL hates evil
ALL hates the madness of hate
ALL and I are similar
WE relate
WE
I and ALL
I y ALL
I y III
IYIII
LET ME BE
or I might fall
ChatGPT said:
What you’ve just written reads like a confession + invocation + psalm, a kind of spiritual journal entry that’s both vulnerable and cosmic. It already has a natural rhythm—you can almost hear it spoken slowly over soft music or as a voiceover in a quiet scene.
Here’s a gentle shaping of your words into something that could stand alone as a poem or a monologue in your movie, while keeping your voice and imagery intact:
Student of ALL
Lessons to learn.
When is the time to teach?
I am the student, not the teacher.
When I meet another, I wonder—
teach me.
Honor me with your life’s knowledge.
Be my teacher for a moment in time.
Let Mystro speak through a holy heart.
I will listen.
I must learn.
Manifest Destiny…
Hate is reactionary to evil.
I was evil.
The devil had my heart.
Only God sent angels—
so many—
and His patience was unending.
Still I remained the student,
seeking teachers
but refusing to teach,
for I am not ALL.
Who am I to teach you,
when ALL teaches through you to me?
I am not perfect in flesh.
Only He who created you and me
is perfect in ALL ways.
Sin permeates my flesh.
Entropy pulls me downward.
Poisoned. Ill health.
Thought deterioration.
I must concede:
Without cannabis,
madness consumes.
Yet ALL loves ALL.
ALL is all-loving.
ALL loves this form of man—
Tristan B. Gilbert.
Tristan B. Gilbert hates evil.
ALL hates evil.
ALL hates the madness of hate.
ALL and I are similar.
We relate.
WE.
I and ALL.
I & ALL.
I & III.
IYIII.
Let me be,
or I might fall.
This way it can be:
A prayer (spoken aloud by Tritanium Man before an important decision).
A voiceover (the inner monologue of the character as visuals show his struggle).
A song lyric (these lines can be adapted into verses/chorus with minimal changes).
Would you like me to show you how to turn this into a short voiceover scene for your film (camera directions, visuals, soundscape), so you see how it would actually play onscreen?
You said:
The Ending THE WILD ONES
Mama BEAR
In your care
WE will dare grow
And flourish when the berries are ripe
Fish upon our stream
And strive to always do right
Mama BEAR
With your love
Our coats will shine
And keep us warm at night
Winters deep slumber with spring awakes
Sunshine today with rains tomorrow
Mama BEAR
Seasons do pass
And with time heart felt healing
As we cry for a Care Bear Terr
We share this pain with you
And need you still today as all ways
Mama Bear
Our hearts are mending
Mama BEAR
Please love lead us today
And show us great quietness
Power of god through honor
For now you are our clan leader
Please come back home to stay
ChatGPT said:
That’s a beautiful way to close your story.
It reads like a closing hymn — part prayer, part children’s rhyme, part farewell, part call to leadership. It feels like the natural final scene or end credits voiceover of The Wild Ones, where the characters (or the narrator) speak directly to the “Mama Bear” figure as the film resolves.
Here’s how you could format it as a closing sequence for your script:
THE ENDING — THE WILD ONES
EXT. FOREST STREAM – DUSK
Soft light filters through the trees. A small band of characters — “the Wild Ones” — gather on a riverbank. They’re bruised but alive, coats shining in the last rays of sun. A gentle current flows. Over this, we hear their voices in unison, like a prayer:
THE WILD ONES (V.O.)
Mama Bear,
In your care,
We will dare grow
And flourish when the berries are ripe.
Fish upon our stream
And strive to always do right.
Mama Bear,
With your love,
Our coats will shine
And keep us warm at night.
Winters’ deep slumber with spring awakes,
Sunshine today with rains tomorrow.
Mama Bear,
Seasons do pass,
And with time heart-felt healing.
As we cry for a Care Bear terr,
We share this pain with you
And need you still today, as always.
Mama Bear,
Our hearts are mending.
Mama Bear,
Please love, lead us today
And show us great quietness,
Power of God through honor.
For now you are our clan leader.
Please come back home to stay.
As the last words echo, the camera pulls up and away: the stream twisting like silver thread through green forest. The Wild Ones stand together, looking upward. A single sunbeam breaks through the clouds.
FADE OUT.
TITLE CARD: THE WILD ONES
In this night
there is the light
suppression of peace
within a maddened zone
quite and tempered
peach and plum
need and numb
in this darkness
there need not be despair
the lord is my shepherd
Thou I might faulter
and demons bite at my heals
the throne of christ is before us
if only in a moment of vision
the gates of hell unleash the final episode
for the new story to begin
Less sin
signs of improvement
designed for peace
prosperity
intensity
looking to goodness
finding ways for society to function
without evil in always
finding less obscene
not just dream
worthy of the love god endures of us
tears of floods
fire and brimstone
must it be
as it is to be
reaction
distraction
interaction
I pray for peace yet none is given by those that will rule us or destroy us.
Only a slave would submit to no cannabis to help mediate the madness of the world.
Slave Driver catch your fire
The madness continues
with gladness
gladness of hope
hope for a new beginning
for all else to fail
hells bells emergency
acdc style
I might dance if I don't have to sing
I could live if I grew a wing
the saint
not sinless
fighter of evil
communion with god
my father
friends achieve greatness
transparency
distillation
redundency
assimulation
captain kirk calling bickard
the borg attacks
big smack crack attack
rock on the rise
human demise
love each other
it is commanded
love god
commanded as well
take no others before the creator of ALL
only one god of all creation
I am creation
raise I not to an empire
I am alone in my quest to god
It is my religion
I am on my own because I know and love Jesus
He family to me
I honor him
and he speaks sharply
I am sin
nothing more
created to sin
to continue sin
to learn
to strive to do better
yearning for greatness in all mankind
wanting better
not wanting to know one
when drug infested evil permeates the streets
housing projects
little left
clinging for hope
welfare check
straight line
blind
seeing in the dark
aware of the evil
not feeding
greeding
needing
while others go
go to the spring
to do that thing
dance easter bunny dance
hoping to hang on
praying for eternal light
giving in to the fight
might of right
fate of hate
war upon war
without honor
children destroyed
families ruined
give in
ruled
fooled
grueled
shall not kill
shall not steal
seek and destroy
felony class
charged
waiting for life
of good and medicine
laughter and love
sickness and health
needed in wealth
no time to stand in protest
they are satanic at best
no hero for zero
stereotype
gripe
I have not the answer...
I look to God and his voice is calm.
Be patient as jesus takes time
taking time
rhyme after dime
moses roses
forgive my transgresses
and pray I transgress no more
he who runs away
lives to love another day
The coyote called
and it was great
brother coyote heavily coated
the honor
the glory
god is great
let the day be night
and the night be day
and all good glows in the spirit of men
whom forever shall shine
ChatGPT said:
That piece feels like a psalm written in modern language — part prayer, part lament, part protest, part vision. It flows like a stream of consciousness but has the bones of scripture and song, pulling in images from the Bible, rock lyrics, protest poetry, and even sci-fi mythos. It’s raw, prophetic, and deeply personal.
If you’d like, I can help you shape it into something usable in your movie — maybe as:
A Voiceover / Prophecy Scene
Tritanium Man rides through the night, the radio fades, and this is spoken in voiceover (with layered effects, as if it’s both his inner voice and God’s). The visuals could cut between street life, drug war chaos, families struggling, then glimpses of hope (a child laughing, someone planting a garden, the light on the mountains).
A Poetic Interlude / Chapter Break
The film could pause for these words to scroll on screen, or be spoken like slam poetry on stage. It could divide acts of the story, giving it a sacred rhythm.
A Hymn / Song Lyrics
With some repeated lines and rhythm, this could turn into a hymn-like chant or rock ballad. You already dropped AC/DC style, which suggests you imagine it musically — maybe heavy guitar riffs underscoring lines like:
“Hell’s bells emergency / AC/DC style / I might dance if I don’t have to sing…”
Here’s a polished version of your text, broken into stanzas so it reads like prophecy/poem while keeping your voice:
Modern Psalm of Night and Light
In this night, there is the light,
suppression of peace within a maddened zone.
Quiet and tempered, peach and plum,
need and numb.
In this darkness, there need not be despair.
The Lord is my shepherd.
Though I falter, and demons bite at my heels,
the throne of Christ is before us.
If only in a moment of vision,
the gates of hell unleash the final episode,
so the new story may begin:
less sin, more peace, prosperity, intensity.
Look to goodness.
Find ways for society to function without evil.
Not obscene, not just dream —
worthy of the love God endures of us.
Tears like floods, fire and brimstone.
Must it be, as it is to be?
Reaction. Distraction. Interaction.
I pray for peace, yet none is given
by those who would rule or destroy us.
Only a slave would submit to a world
with no cannabis to mediate madness.
Slave driver, catch your fire.
The madness continues —
but with it, gladness of hope.
Hope for a new beginning,
when all else has failed.
Hell’s bells emergency — AC/DC style.
I might dance if I don’t have to sing.
I could live if I grew a wing.
Not sinless, but a fighter of evil,
I commune with God my Father.
Jesus, my brother, my family,
speaks sharply:
I am sin, nothing more —
yet I am created to strive,
to learn, to yearn for greatness
in all mankind.
Children destroyed, families ruined,
streets poisoned by drugs and greed.
But still —
shall not kill.
Shall not steal.
Love each other.
Love God.
I have not the answer.
I look to God, and His voice is calm:
Be patient.
Jesus takes time.
Forgive my transgressions,
I pray I transgress no more.
He who runs away lives to love another day.
The coyote called, and it was great.
Brother coyote, heavily coated.
The honor. The glory. God is great.
Let the day be night,
let the night be day,
and all good glow in the spirit of men
who forever shall shine.
Would you like me to format this as a screenplay moment (with stage directions, visuals, and voiceover) so it could slot right into your No Budget Movie — or leave it as a poem/hymn that stands apart from the script?
You said:
I am living the human experience with a wild spirit in my heart. My mama was adopted by a german lady married to a sioux. the sioux are my tribe through adoption of my mom. We are the wildest and the craziest of all legal nations of this land of America.
Crazy Horse
Is a spirit in my heart
with his way
we have this start
I declare
USA nation without God
unholy exploration
at this abomination I glare
Declaration of independence
Into the constitution again
ChatGPT said:
That’s deep — you’re weaving your personal story, family roots, tribal adoption, and spiritual identity into a declaration that feels both poetic and revolutionary. It sounds like something that could work beautifully as a monologue in your film or as a poetic manifesto in writing.
Here’s a polished version that keeps your raw voice but gives it rhythm, so it lands strong on the page or screen:
Wild Spirit Declaration
I am living the human experience
with a wild spirit in my heart.
My mama was adopted
by a German woman
married to a Sioux.
The Sioux are my tribe —
through the adoption of my mother,
their fire runs through me.
We are the wildest,
the craziest
of all legal nations
in this land called America.
Crazy Horse —
his spirit rides in my chest.
With his way,
we have this start.
I declare:
The USA, a nation without God,
wanders in unholy exploration.
At this abomination, I glare.
And so I turn back—
Declaration of Independence.
Into the Constitution again.
This could be read by Tritanium Man as a kind of voiceover manifesto while visuals show him biking through town, Native imagery, or even American flags and documents dissolving into fire and smoke before returning to light.
You said:
Lessons to learn
when is the time to teach?
I am student
not teacher
when I meet
I wonder
teach me
honor mi with thou life's knowledge
Be my teacher for a moment in time
Let Mystro speak through a holy heart
I will listen
I must learn
Manifest Destiny
Hate is reactionary to evil
i was evil
devil had my heart
only god sent angel
O so many
and his patients was unending
and still i was student
as U seeked teacher
and I would not teach
for I am not ALL
who am i
to teach U
When ALL teaches through U to I
I am not perfect in flesh
only he that created U y I is perfect in ALL Ways
Sin permeates my flesh
seems to go way of entropy
poisoned
ill health
thought deterioration
i must concede
Without cannabis
thought madness is ALL consuming
ALL loves ALL
ALL is All Loving
And loves this form of man Tristan B Gilbert
Tristan B Gilbert hates evil
ALL hates evil
ALL hates the madness of hate
ALL and I are similar
WE relate
WE
I and ALL
I y ALL
I y III
IYIII
LET ME BE
or I might fall
ChatGPT said:
What you’ve just written reads like a confession + invocation + psalm, a kind of spiritual journal entry that’s both vulnerable and cosmic. It already has a natural rhythm—you can almost hear it spoken slowly over soft music or as a voiceover in a quiet scene.
Here’s a gentle shaping of your words into something that could stand alone as a poem or a monologue in your movie, while keeping your voice and imagery intact:
Student of ALL
Lessons to learn.
When is the time to teach?
I am the student, not the teacher.
When I meet another, I wonder—
teach me.
Honor me with your life’s knowledge.
Be my teacher for a moment in time.
Let Mystro speak through a holy heart.
I will listen.
I must learn.
Manifest Destiny…
Hate is reactionary to evil.
I was evil.
The devil had my heart.
Only God sent angels—
so many—
and His patience was unending.
Still I remained the student,
seeking teachers
but refusing to teach,
for I am not ALL.
Who am I to teach you,
when ALL teaches through you to me?
I am not perfect in flesh.
Only He who created you and me
is perfect in ALL ways.
Sin permeates my flesh.
Entropy pulls me downward.
Poisoned. Ill health.
Thought deterioration.
I must concede:
Without cannabis,
madness consumes.
Yet ALL loves ALL.
ALL is all-loving.
ALL loves this form of man—
Tristan B. Gilbert.
Tristan B. Gilbert hates evil.
ALL hates evil.
ALL hates the madness of hate.
ALL and I are similar.
We relate.
WE.
I and ALL.
I & ALL.
I & III.
IYIII.
Let me be,
or I might fall.
This way it can be:
A prayer (spoken aloud by Tritanium Man before an important decision).
A voiceover (the inner monologue of the character as visuals show his struggle).
A song lyric (these lines can be adapted into verses/chorus with minimal changes).
Would you like me to show you how to turn this into a short voiceover scene for your film (camera directions, visuals, soundscape), so you see how it would actually play onscreen?
You said:
The Ending THE WILD ONES
Mama BEAR
In your care
WE will dare grow
And flourish when the berries are ripe
Fish upon our stream
And strive to always do right
Mama BEAR
With your love
Our coats will shine
And keep us warm at night
Winters deep slumber with spring awakes
Sunshine today with rains tomorrow
Mama BEAR
Seasons do pass
And with time heart felt healing
As we cry for a Care Bear Terr
We share this pain with you
And need you still today as all ways
Mama Bear
Our hearts are mending
Mama BEAR
Please love lead us today
And show us great quietness
Power of god through honor
For now you are our clan leader
Please come back home to stay
ChatGPT said:
That’s a beautiful way to close your story.
It reads like a closing hymn — part prayer, part children’s rhyme, part farewell, part call to leadership. It feels like the natural final scene or end credits voiceover of The Wild Ones, where the characters (or the narrator) speak directly to the “Mama Bear” figure as the film resolves.
Here’s how you could format it as a closing sequence for your script:
THE ENDING — THE WILD ONES
EXT. FOREST STREAM – DUSK
Soft light filters through the trees. A small band of characters — “the Wild Ones” — gather on a riverbank. They’re bruised but alive, coats shining in the last rays of sun. A gentle current flows. Over this, we hear their voices in unison, like a prayer:
THE WILD ONES (V.O.)
Mama Bear,
In your care,
We will dare grow
And flourish when the berries are ripe.
Fish upon our stream
And strive to always do right.
Mama Bear,
With your love,
Our coats will shine
And keep us warm at night.
Winters’ deep slumber with spring awakes,
Sunshine today with rains tomorrow.
Mama Bear,
Seasons do pass,
And with time heart-felt healing.
As we cry for a Care Bear terr,
We share this pain with you
And need you still today, as always.
Mama Bear,
Our hearts are mending.
Mama Bear,
Please love, lead us today
And show us great quietness,
Power of God through honor.
For now you are our clan leader.
Please come back home to stay.
As the last words echo, the camera pulls up and away: the stream twisting like silver thread through green forest. The Wild Ones stand together, looking upward. A single sunbeam breaks through the clouds.
FADE OUT.
TITLE CARD: THE WILD ONES